My five senses writing: T-Ball

WALT describe using the 5 senses

• look
• hear
• taste
• smell
• feel or touch

My scene: T-Ball field

I grip the wooden bat in my hand as I look out towards the fielders. I fell them looking at me waiting for me to hit the ball. Some of them are cupping their hands ready to catch. I am the last batter I have to try and get everyone home “Play ball!” calls Mrs Roil. I take a deep breath and swing the bat at the ball. Smack! It goes flying past the fielders. I quickly run and drop the bat on the pad. Then I carry on towards base one. I can hear my teammates clapping in the background as I touch base one. I can feel my feet pounding underneath me. I can see base two in front of me. I keep running as the fielders reach the ball.

I can smell the dirt around me and taste my breakfast in my teeth. The fielders are coming back now as I touch the edge of base two. One of them throws the ball towards home base. I start to speed up everyone else has reached home base. I touch base three as I zip round the corner the ball hasn't reached it's destination it is still being passed down. I’m almost there 2 meters, 1 meter. HOME RUN!