Wednesday, April 02, 2014

Parkvale Today

This is my poem called Parkvale Today and here is a  link to the original somewhere today.


  1. I like how you presented your poem with Google drawing, Elijah. You have given it an effective layout. Your recording is clear too. Your poem gives a neat little snapshot of Parkvale.

  2. Hi Elijah - what a great poem. I especially enjoyed hearing you read it. You have chosen interesting details about your school and it helped me get a snapshot of what it is like. Keep up the great writing, Louise Dempsey

  3. Wow! Elijah you have been acknowledged by one of New Zealands leading literacy experts - well done!!! Your poem captures why being at Parkvale School is soooooo cool.


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