WARNING: Totaly Amazing
I like how you presented your poem with Google drawing, Elijah. You have given it an effective layout. Your recording is clear too. Your poem gives a neat little snapshot of Parkvale.
Hi Elijah - what a great poem. I especially enjoyed hearing you read it. You have chosen interesting details about your school and it helped me get a snapshot of what it is like. Keep up the great writing, Louise Dempsey
Wow! Elijah you have been acknowledged by one of New Zealands leading literacy experts - well done!!! Your poem captures why being at Parkvale School is soooooo cool.