- begins in action
- present tense
- short,sharp sentences
It’s Christmas day and we’re playing with our new toys as our auntie,
uncle and new baby cousin Isaac pull up in the driveway. “Hello” we called as
they got out of our Nana and Grandads car. They had just come from the Auckland.
“Hi” my auntie and uncle replied. My siblings ignored them they were too busy staring
at Isaac. Each one of us got a hug. It’s looking like it’s going to be a good day.