Thursday, May 23, 2013

The red light?

This is my story inspired by literacy starter

We’re on our holiday and lost on the mountain. We’ve traveling for days up and down the the mountain calling for help and trying to get back. It’s a good thing we had tents and sleeping bags with us otherwise we would be in trouble. Today we're heading to the top of the mountain to see if we can get some of the campers attention by lite the flear we packed before we left. I wish we hadn’t left. We start off up the mountain we only ly get 1km before we stop. I feel like I’m going to die but it’s only five minutes before we carry on up the to the to. It ‘s night now as crazy as it sounds we only made it halfway there it’s a pretty big mountain and we lose each other a lot. I wake up And I see light outside it must morning i think to myself I go outside it’s pitch black I turn around to see a faint red light in the distance for a minute I thought someone had found us and I ran and shout “we're over here we're over here” but the light keeps moving “stop” I yell suddenly it stops it turn and comes toward me. As it got closer it got bigger and bigger and bigger
it was a spaceship an alien space ship what was I going to do I ran and called for help I woke the others and tried to show them what I saw but by the time I convinced them to get up and see the ship was gone. What was happening?

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  1. Wow that's some story and a cool photo to support your story too

  2. Cool story Elijah.You wrote heaps of work.Keep the good work up!

  3. Wow Elijah nice writing I like the descriptive words and good sentence starters. Keep up the good work. :)


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