We had to write a story about a book we read. It's almost the same but in my version...
We arrive at the the sport’s center, Not a minute to lose.
I rush onto the court. we put are band’s on they feel so sweaty and smell so bad I here my team going “yuck that’s so gross” but I don’t mind how sweaty or smelly they were because I just want to play the game. Sometimes I get knocked over or injured but I don’t mind because I know I’m playing my best. BANG BANG BANG is the sound that I hear when the ball bounces up and down the court, the ball flies back and forth from player to player as my team passes the ball down the court I rush under the basket. All of a sudden they ball lands in my hands. I feel the vibrations of the opponent's feet thumping down hard on the court.Take the a shot, I hear my team chanting.
I stand in front of the basket. I took a huge leap. I feel nervous as the ball went flying through the air. The ball went straight through the hoop. A point. we didn't win but I feel proud of myself. At the end of the game we shook the other team’s hand then walked back to the coach to see who had got player of the day. We all waited finally the coach spoke “today player of the goes to Elijah” I feel really happy. I can’t wait until the next game.